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Whitened the trees by the frost outside
But inside me, a warmth awoken
By the fiery look in your eyes

Quivering, my body awaits your touch
More intense than the thousand fireworks
Which explode in the darkened skies

And as my hand finds its place in yours
I let your words nourish my soul
And I lose myself in your soft embrace
While I whisper “I want you, my love”

And the moon and the stars will twinkle our way
And the crickets will play us our song
And I will drown myself, once again,
In the sea that your green eyes hold
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happy new year!!

ok - i realise some parts are slightly cliche, but i suppose love IS slightly cliche. and what we feel, that which we reckon is new and has never been felt by anyone before... how naive and egotistical of us!! many people have been blessed with love. i believe love comes in different shades of red... this poem is orange-red...

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red is beauyful , so is green, and love.

Good luck and happy new year ;)
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thank you, same to you :D
and i know that you like red - if i had to guess which shade, i'd go for burgondy/sangria? ;)
green is beautiful, true, but what can beat the blue in the skies that surround us??

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